[bmwg] Update to to draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance
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Cc: 'Warren Kumari' <warren@kumari.net>, "'MORTON JR., AL'" <acmorton@att.com>, sbanks@encrypted.net, tpauly@apple.com, timcopley@gmail.com, 'Carsten Rossenhoevel' <cross@eantc.de>, bm.balarajah@gmail.com
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Subject: [bmwg] Update to to draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance
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Folks, The following editorial changes have been made to draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance in responses to suggestions/comments made by Warren Kumari, Tommy Pauly and Tim Copely. We replied to the comments on Jan. 5th. The following changes have been made: 1. updated section 1. Introduction to enhance readability. 2. Clarified the wording in section 4.3.1.3 Emulated Web Browser Attributes regarding HTTP/3 using QUIC and HTTP/2, including the proper RFC references. We also removed the long name of QUIC that was included in error. 3. Updated section 4.3.2.3. We added for clarification, HTTP/3 to the server side. Best regards, Brian --------- Brian Monkman Executive Director, NetSecOPEN Office: +1-717-610-0808 Fax: +1-717-506-0460 Mobile: +1-717-462-5422 https://www.netsecopen.org