Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9001 <draft-ietf-quic-tls-34.txt> NOW AVAILABLE

["Martin Thomson" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Sandy,

Just a few brief responses.

On Tue, May 4, 2021, at 06:07, Sandy Ginoza wrote:
> Perhaps:
>    Thus, endpoints that do not send packets larger than 2^11 bytes
>    cannot protect more than 2^28 packets in a single connection without
>    causing an attacker to gain a more significant advantage than the
>    target of 2^-57.

I was thinking of rewriting it, but this is better than what I had in mind.  Thanks.

> In RFC 9001, I believe the type was set to pseudocode where the lead-in 
> text introduced what followed as pseudocode.  For these cases, is 
> <sourcecode type=“”> suitable (i.e., no type set)?  Or is the 
> preference to revert to <artwork>?    

I would prefer that these remain <artwork>.  I don't think that our tools can produce an empty type on <sourcecode> and the intent was always that these are illustrations rather than "code".  I've checked all artwork in the document, so what you receive should be correct.

> We will pass your suggestion along to the XML and style guide change 
> management group.

Thanks.  If there was an open process for that, I'd be even happier.