[calsify] draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-23

Ken Murchison <murch@fastmail.com> Tue, 18 February 2020 19:44 UTC

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Subject: [calsify] draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-23
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A few editorial nits:

4.3.2.1, item 2, applying skip, item 1:  I suggest adding a comma 
between "given year" and "increment it" as I think it makes

4.4.2: "Specifies how this property..." -> "Specifies how the calendar 
object..."

         Also, is there a particular reason the busy-unavailable and 
busy-tentative values from 5545 have been excluded?


Can I assume that the reason that a property that could be represented 
as an array of items (e.g. roles) is instead represented as an object 
with key=true items is that arrays can't be patched but items CAN be 
removed from an object with a patch setting key=false?  Whether this is 
the case or not, should this design decision be discussed somewhere?

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