Re: [calsify] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9073 (7380)

Ken Murchison <murch@fastmail.com> Wed, 08 November 2023 20:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [calsify] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9073 (7380)
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Actually, as Mike mentioned in his email to the calsify list only, the 
corrected text should instead reference the RFC 9074 properties for the 
two alarm types that support descriptions. E.g.:

     ; Addition of property STYLED-DESCRIPTION
     disppropext  =/ styleddescription  ; OPTIONAL and MAY occur more 
than once

     ; Addition of property STYLED-DESCRIPTION
     emailpropext  =/ styleddescription   ; OPTIONAL and MAY occur more 
than once


On 11/7/23 11:19 AM, Ken Murchison wrote:
> I believe that this report should be verified, but Mike should have 
> the final call.
>
>
> On 3/9/23 4:45 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9073,
>> "Event Publishing Extensions to iCalendar".
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7380
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Technical
>> Reported by: Olaf Bartelt <obartelt@amtangee.com>
>>
>> Section: 4
>>
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> The following changes to the syntax defined in iCalendar [RFC5545]
>>     are made here.  New elements are defined in subsequent sections.
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     eventc     = "BEGIN" ":" "VEVENT" CRLF
>>                  eventprop *alarmc *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VEVENT" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     eventprop  =/ *styleddescription
>>                   *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     todoc      = "BEGIN" ":" "VTODO" CRLF
>>                  todoprop *alarmc *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VTODO" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     todoprop =/ *styleddescription
>>                 *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     journalc   = "BEGIN" ":" "VJOURNAL" CRLF
>>                  jourprop *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VJOURNAL" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     jourprop =/ *styleddescription
>>                 *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     freebusyc  = "BEGIN" ":" "VFREEBUSY" CRLF
>>                  fbprop *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VFREEBUSY" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of property STYLED-DESCRIPTION
>>     fbprop     =/ *styleddescription
>>
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> The following changes to the syntax defined in iCalendar [RFC5545]
>>     are made here.  New elements are defined in subsequent sections.
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     eventc     = "BEGIN" ":" "VEVENT" CRLF
>>                  eventprop *alarmc *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VEVENT" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     eventprop  =/ *styleddescription
>>                   *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     todoc      = "BEGIN" ":" "VTODO" CRLF
>>                  todoprop *alarmc *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VTODO" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     todoprop =/ *styleddescription
>>                 *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     journalc   = "BEGIN" ":" "VJOURNAL" CRLF
>>                  jourprop *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VJOURNAL" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of properties STYLED-DESCRIPTION and STRUCTURED-DATA
>>     jourprop =/ *styleddescription
>>                 *sdataprop
>>
>>     ; Addition of PARTICIPANT, VLOCATION, and VRESOURCE
>>     ; as valid components
>>     freebusyc  = "BEGIN" ":" "VFREEBUSY" CRLF
>>                  fbprop *participantc *locationc *resourcec
>>                  "END" ":" "VFREEBUSY" CRLF
>>
>>     ; Addition of property STYLED-DESCRIPTION
>>     fbprop     =/ *styleddescription
>>
>>     ; Addition of property STYLED-DESCRIPTION
>>     alarmprop  =/ *styleddescription
>>
>> Notes
>> -----
>> The usage of STYLED-DESCRIPTION in VALARMs is mentioned in section 
>> 6.5, but not represented as an extension to the syntax in section 4.
>>
>> Instructions:
>> -------------
>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC9073 (draft-ietf-calext-eventpub-extensions-19)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Event Publishing Extensions to iCalendar
>> Publication Date    : August 2021
>> Author(s)           : M. Douglass
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Calendaring Extensions
>> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>
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