[Capwap] Editorial nit in the Abstract of draft-ietf-capwap-protocol-specification-12.txt

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 17 September 2008 10:00 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
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Subject: [Capwap] Editorial nit in the Abstract of draft-ietf-capwap-protocol-specification-12.txt
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While preparing the ballot write-up for the IESG telechat for
draft-ietf-capwap-protocol-specification-12.txt I observed an editorial
nit in the Abstract section. 

   This specification defines the Control And Provisioning of Wireless
   Access Points (CAPWAP) Protocol.  The CAPWAP protocol meets the
   Objectives for Control and Provisioning of Wireless Access Points
   (CAPWAP).  The CAPWAP protocol is designed to be flexible, allowing
   it to be used for a variety of wireless technologies.  This document
   describes the base CAPWAP protocol, while separate binding extensions
   will enable its use with additional wireless technologies.

CAPWAP is expanded twice which seems unnecessary. 

Please correct this with the RFC Editor or in the next version of the
document if there will be one. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan
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