[Cats] Re: some comments on draft-zhangb-cats-cmas-05

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Hi, Bin
Thanks for your quick reply. 
We will discuss more in future, together with other relevant drafts. 

BG
Miao



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From: 张宾 <zhangb@pcl.ac.cn>
  
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Date: 2026年08月04日 15:18
  
Subject: [Cats] Re: some comments on draft-zhangb-cats-cmas-05
  


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Hi, Miao,

 OK,thank you for the suggestion.


 We will update the draft in the next revision in accordance with your suggestions.


Regards
Bin





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Hi Authors,
I just reviewed your draft draft-zhangb-cats-cmas-05 "Public Service Platform for Computing-Aware Traffic Steering (CATS)".
I have a few suggestions regarding the terminology and content in this document:

Terminology adjustment: I believe "service resolution" or "service interpretation" would be more accurate than "service discovery" in this context. The current function is simply to retrieve CS-ID related information, rather than actively discovering concrete service instances. Moreover, using "discovery" may cause ambiguity with the existing "discovery" functionality within DAWN.

Additional service information: I suggest including the service version number and other relevant service metadata alongside the existing information.

Input description: I recommend renaming the "input description" field to "input schema" for better clarity and alignment with common API documentation practices.

BG
Miao