[Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03
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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones=40microsoft.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "cbor@ietf.org" <cbor@ietf.org>
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Subject: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03
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Hi Mike,
While reviewing for the shepherd writeup I found the following minor issues:
Section 1:
I would suggest removing the comma from the number: 40,587. Using the comma as separator is not the best, as in some countries it is used as decimal sign (also not preferred but allowed in ISO 8601).
From I-D nits:
== The document doesn't use any RFC 2119 keywords, yet seems to have RFC
2119 boilerplate text.
Is it necessary to have the 2119 - 8174 boilerplate text even if no normative keywords are used?
[POSIX.1] seems more like a normative reference to me, don't you think?
Thanks,
Francesca
- [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Francesca Palombini
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Mike Jones
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Francesca Palombini
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Mike Jones
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Barry Leiba
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Mike Jones
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Barry Leiba
- Re: [Cbor] Review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-03 Mike Jones