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Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Tue, 12 April 2022 14:09 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
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Michael, Carsten,

 

Thanks for the changes, they look good. I will schedule the document for the next telechat (April 21st) – additional text for the appendices would be welcome, you can maybe see if any can be added together with any changes from Last Call reviews that should be arriving this week.

 

Francesca

 

On 04/04/2022, 16:04, "Michael Richardson" <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> wrote:

 

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:

    >> 17. -----

    >>

    >> […]

    >>

    >> Also it is a bit confusing to use "NNNNNNNN" and not just "N" (as I

    >> read it as a decimal, and 8xN doesn't really give me any more

    >> information about the number).

 

    > I think NNNNNNNN is a reasonable representation of a larger number, but

    > I’m also not opposed to changing this to N (twice).

 

I replied in the email that I didn't think we needed to change here.

 

    > Also, we might want to work a bit on:

 

    >> 18. -----

    >>

    >> Appendix A

    >>

    >> FP: I have some vague memory of this being discussed during interims -

    >> so please remind me if I have forgotten, but why is this an appendix

    >> rather than in the document itself?

 

    > We might provide a little more text about moving this into an appendix.

 

I will look again, I thought we already did that.

 

    >> 19. -----

    >>

    >> Appendix C

    >>

    >> FP: I think a bit more text around the motivation and need for such a tag would be useful.

 

    > Yes, that also could use a bit more work.

 

    > Despite 18 and 19 not yet being addressed, I would prefer to submit a

    > -11 with what we have now so people actually review that and not -10.

 

published.

 

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