Re: [CCAMP] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-06.txt

Adrian Farrel <Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com> Sat, 02 October 2010 08:16 UTC

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Date: Sat, 02 Oct 2010 09:11:32 +0100
From: Adrian Farrel <Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com>
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Thanks David,

[snip]

> The following 3 IANA-related nits still need attention:
>
> - In Section 4.1, remove the note to IANA after 2) and instead
> insert this instruction into Section 7.

This is already the first bullet point in Section 7.
The RFC Editor will spot "suggested value" in 4.1 and update it.

> - In Figure 4, the type is TBA.  Add an instruction to Section 7 for IANA
> to fill this in after it is allocated.

RFC Editor has the practice of searching for TBA and replacing with the 
values assigned by IANA.

> - In the fourth bullet in Section 7, please state that the registry is 
> created
> by the MLN-EXT draft if that is the case.

This was already added in -06

Thanks,
Adrian