Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action:draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-vcat-lcas-09.txt

[Greg Bernstein <[e-mail]>]

Hello CCAMP the LC comments were resolved as follows:
(a) All suggestions for corrections to grammar and punctuation were 
implemented.
(b) Adopted new suggested wording for section 4 clarifying that this 
section is informational .
(c) Added conceptual clarification to section 5, to differentiate 
concepts from implementation considerations. Added explanatory figure 1.
(d) Clarified the VCAT TLV in section 5.2.
(e) Clarified and elaborated on the procedures of section 5.3
(f) Elaborated on the error conditions/codes of section 6.
(g) Edited and updated the IANA considerations (section 7).

Best Regards

Greg

Lou Berger wrote:
> Authors,
>     Thank you for the post-LC revision.  Please let the WG know how 
> the last call comments were resolved.
>
> Lou
>
> On 1/11/2010 1:30 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane 
>> Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>
>>     Title           : draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-vcat-lcas-09.txt
>>     Author(s)       : G. Bernstein, et al.
>>     Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-vcat-lcas-09.txt
>>     Pages           : 21
>>     Date            : 2010-01-11
>>
>> This document describes requirements for, and use of, the Generalized
>> Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) control plane in conjunction
>> with the Virtual Concatenation (VCAT) layer 1 inverse multiplexing
>> mechanism and its companion Link Capacity Adjustment Scheme (LCAS)
>> which can be used for hitless dynamic resizing of the inverse
>> multiplex group.  These techniques apply to Optical Transport Network
>> (OTN), Synchronous Optical Network (SONET), Synchronous Digital
>> Hierarchy (SDH), and Plesiochronous Digital Hierarchy (PDH) signals.
>>
>> Conventions used in this document
>>
>> The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>> "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
>> document are to be interpreted as described in RFC-2119 [RFC2119].
>>
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