[CCAMP] 答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-20.txt

Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com> Fri, 03 February 2023 02:13 UTC

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Hi, WG, again. 

I was just aware that one rtgdir review was missed, so a -21 is coming to address them. 

[4] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/_DwTMz1NTqobcloqDID19AjAK3s/ from Adrian

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Hi CCAMPers, 

We have updated this draft according to the comments received in rtgdir review, WG LC. More specifically, most of the following are addressed. 

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/ocu7N6fEWUGcpAjYikcJ-_yjTT4/ Comments from rtgdir review [2] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/gbFiTgCzzlx9gEjDjL2TDdSA6pg/ Comments & discussion from Tom Petch
[3] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/QEB9aFXjqdUREYuom4TENNBtG8o/ from Adrian	

Thank you. 


Best wishes,
Haomian (on behalf of authors/contributors)




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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane WG of the IETF.

        Title           : A YANG Data Model for L1 Connectivity Service Model (L1CSM)
        Authors         : Young Lee
                          KwangKoog Lee
                          Haomian Zheng
                          Oscar Gonzalez de Dios
                          Daniele Ceccarelli
  Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-20.txt
  Pages           : 18
  Date            : 2023-02-01

Abstract:
   This document provides a YANG Layer 1 Connectivity Service Model
   (L1CSM).

   This model can be utilized by a customer network controller to
   initiate a connectivity service request as well as to retrieve
   service states for a Layer 1 network controller communicating with
   its customer network controller.  This YANG model is NMDA-compliant.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-20

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-20


Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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