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[CCAMP] 回复: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17

Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com> Fri, 19 April 2024 13:13 UTC

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From: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: [CCAMP] 回复: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
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Hi Stewart, 

Thank you for the review, the unused references are removed in -18. 

Best wishes,
Haomian (on behalf of all authors & contributors) 

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发件人: Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> 
发送时间: 2024年2月29日 2:50
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主题: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.

Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2024-02-28
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:From a GenArt perspective this draft is ready for publication. As per other review comments I trust that a YANG expert has validated the YANG models.
There are a couple of minor nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model' is defined on line
     3662, but no explicit reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4203' is defined on line 3684, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC7138' is defined on line 3698, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

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