WG last call comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-interas-te-extension-02.txt
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 25 March 2008 18:35 UTC
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Subject: WG last call comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-interas-te-extension-02.txt
Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2008 18:24:17 -0000
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Hi, Here are a few very minor review comments. It is probable that similar comments apply to the ISIS draft. Can you check? Thanks, Adrian === Header s/Network work group/Network working group/ Please show names as "M. Chen" === Abstract s/Engineering(TE)/Engineering (TE)/ s/information from other outside the AS/information from outside the AS/ === OSPFv3-TE I am currently trying to close an issue down with the OSPF WG chairs and the ADs. Your I-D includes extensions to OSPFv3-TE as requested by the OSPF working group. This means that you are correct to have the OSPFv3-TE draft as a Normative reference. However, the OSPFv3-TE draft is stalled in the OSPF working group where: - the draft has just expired - there is more than one implementation - there are no known deployments - no interop testing has been done This means that the OSPFv3-TE draft might not advance for some time and might leave your draft stalled in the RFC Editor queue. I will update the working group as we make progress on this issue. === Section 2.1 s/excluded.:/excluded:/ === Section 2.2 s/PATH/Path/ x2 s/Section 4.0/Section 4./ === Section 2.3 s/TE link is particular/TE link is particularly/ === Section 3.1.1 s/network-wide policy choice/AS-wide policy choice/ === Section 3.2 s/Both/Both the/ === Sections 3.3.1, 3.3.2, and 3.3.3 Please include a forward reference to Section 6.2 when you discuss the TLV type assignment and mention IANA. === Section 4 s/link , the ASBR/link, the ASBR/ s/consequently , an/consequently, an/ s/considering here(i.e.,/considering here (i.e.,/ === Section 6.1 Please separate the OSPFv2 and OSPFv3 assignments into separate paragraphs (or sections). Please reference the IANA registries by name "Opaque Link-State Advertisements (LSA) Option Types" for OSPFv2, and "Open Shortest Path First v3 (OSPFv3) Parameters" with sub-registry "OSPFv3 LSA Function Codes" for OSPFv3. === Section 8.2 [PD-PATH] is now RFC 5152 ===
- WG last call comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-in… Adrian Farrel
- Re: WG last call comments ondraft-ietf-ccamp-ospf… Mach Chen
- Update: WG last call comments on draft-ietf-ccamp… Adrian Farrel