[CCAMP] AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension
"BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com> Mon, 12 September 2016 17:24 UTC
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From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>
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Subject: [CCAMP] AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension
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Hi, I've reviewed this document and provided some comments directly to the authors (using a word file): - mostly suggestions to improve readability - added some sentences on scoping to help the non-GMPLS reader understand this is only protocol e.g. the information and use of it is outside the scope. - added a couple of sentences to boost the security section Thanks, Deborah
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