Re: [CCAMP] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-08: (with COMMENT)

stefan vallin <stefan@wallan.se> Tue, 09 April 2019 12:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry!
Thanks for your review!

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> COMMENT:
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> 
> — Section 3.2 —
> 
> A nit:
>   For example, a system with digital inputs that allows users to
>   connects detectors (e.g., smoke detector) to the inputs.
> 
> This is a sentence fragment ans also has a number error in “connects”.
> 
> NEW
> An example is a system with digital inputs that allows users to connect
> detectors, such as smoke detectors, to the inputs. END
> 
> 
Good comment!
Fixed 
br Stefan and Martin