Re: [CCAMP] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Mon, 28 May 2018 07:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you Amy

Le 2018-05-28 à 9:46, Yemin (Amy) a écrit :
> Hi Martin,
> 
> Thanks for the comments, we will update the reference sections as you suggested in next version.
> 
> BR,
> Amy
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Martin Vigoureux [mailto:martin.vigoureux@nokia.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, May 23, 2018 9:43 PM
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> Cc: draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework@ietf.org; Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com; ccamp@ietf.org
> Subject: Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)
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> Martin Vigoureux has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Hello,
> 
> this document is well written and very clear. Thank you.
> 
> In Section 1.1 you write:
>     This document does not define any protocol extension, hence only
>     [RFC2119] [RFC8174] can be considered as a normative reference.
>     However, the list of normative references includes a number of
>     documents that can be useful for a better understanding of the
>     context.
> I would then suggest to keep only these two refs as Normative ones and move all the other as Informative, the purpose of which is just to list documents "that can be useful for a better understanding of the context"
> 
>