[CCAMP] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-27: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [CCAMP] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-27: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-27: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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** Section 4. Thank you for using the YANG Security Considerations template. 
The text only notes the sensitivity of data nodes for write-operations. 
Customarily, there is a statement about nodes considered sensitive for reading
– are there none here?

** Section 1.2. Editorial.  s/used in chapter 2/used in Section 2/