Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-transport-nbi-app-statement-12

["Belotti, Sergio (Nokia - IT/Vimercate)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Italo,
Only one comment: the TE tunnel hand-off in Tutorial draft, is defined  for the "point",
I mean :
TE tunnel hand-off point - an access link or inter-domain link by which a multi-domain TE tunnel enters or exits a given network domain, in conjunction with a layer network resource (such as a wavelength channel or ODUk container) allocated on the access/inter-domain link for the TE tunnel

For the rest I have no objection.

Thanks
Sergio



From: CCAMP <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Italo Busi
Sent: Wednesday, March 24, 2021 7:34 PM
To: 'Daniele Ceccarelli' <[e-mail]>; CCAMP <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-transport-nbi-app-statement-12

Hi all,

I think the document is ready for publication

There is a note that calls for some text update which can be done during the WG LC based on the discussion we have had with the authors of [TE-TUNNEL] and [TE-TUTORIAL] drafts:

https://github.com/tsaad-dev/te/issues/59

I would propose the following change to the draft:

OLD

   TE Tunnel: As defined in [TE-TUTORIAL], it is a connection-oriented
   service provided by a layer network of delivery of a client's data
   between source and destination tunnel termination points.

   TE Tunnel Segment: As defined in [TE-TUTORIAL], it is a part of a
   multi-domain TE tunnel that spans.

   TE Tunnel Hand-off: As defined in [TE-TUTORIAL], it is an access
   link or inter-domain link by which a multi-domain TE tunnel enters
   or exits a given network domain.

   Note - The three definitions above are currently in [TE-TUTORIAL]
   but it is expected that they will be moved to [TE-TUNNEL]. When this
   happens, the reference will be updated and the [TE-TUTORIAL]
   reference will be downgraded to Informative.

NEW

   TE Tunnel: As defined in [TE-TUNNEL], it is a connection-oriented
   service provided by a layer network of delivery of a client's data
   between source and destination tunnel termination points. See also
   [TE-TUTORIAL].

   TE Tunnel Segment: As defined in [TE-TUNNEL], it is a part of a
   multi-domain TE tunnel that spans. See also [TE-TUTORIAL].

   TE Tunnel Hand-off: It is an access link or inter-domain link by
   which a multi-domain TE tunnel enters or exits a given network
   domain. See also [TE-TUTORIAL].

Italo (as co-editor)

From: Daniele Ceccarelli [mailto:[e-mail]]
Sent: giovedì 11 marzo 2021 18:37
To: CCAMP <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-transport-nbi-app-statement-12

CCAMP,

the IPR declaration collection has been successfully completed before the IETF week and we can move to the next step.

This starts a 2 weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-transport-nbi-app-statement-12
The last call ends on Thursday March 25th. Please send you comments to the CCAMP mailing list.

All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been collected and can be found in the history of the document https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-transport-nbi-app-statement/history/
Please note that no IPR has been disclosed against this document.

If interested, please volunteer to be the shepherd of the draft.




Thanks

Daniele & Fatai