Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Thu, 22 November 2018 16:06 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Martin Bjorklund" <mbj@tail-f.com>;
Sent: Thursday, November 22, 2018 7:52 AM
>
> Thanks for catching these, all addressed in -06.

Martin

That was quick!

But ...
-05 had
"        in RFC 2119 (https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2119)."
which looked like plain text which is right for a YANG module
-06 has
"       as described in BCP 14 [RFC 2119] [RFC8174] when "
which looks like XML/HTML and not plain text, which is not right for a
YANG module.

My other points are addressed.

Tom Petch

>
> /martin
>
> tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>; wrote:
> > Daniele
> >
> > Some non-technical comments
> >
> > IANA Considerations seems not to register ietf-alarms-x733
> >
> > X.721 is referenced in the module but not in I-D References
> >
> > YANG module quotes RFC2119 but not RFC8174
> >
> > Dates in examples are 2015 - 2018 might give a better impression
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>;
> > To: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>;;
> > <ccamp@ietf.org>;
> > Sent: Wednesday, November 21, 2018 2:32 PM
> >
> >
> > > Working group,
> > >
> > > The last call is now concluded. I take the lack of comments as a
"we
> > already
> > > discussed a lot this draft during its life as WG document" and
hence
> > proceed
> > > with the request for publication.
> > >
> > > Even if among the authors we have a huge level of competence in
YANG
> > > modelling we'll request for a YANG doctors review as a pair of
fresh
> > eyes is
> > > in any case helpful.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >
> > > Daniele
> > >
> > > From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org>; On Behalf Of Daniele
Ceccarelli
> > > Sent: den 7 november 2018 12:18
> > > To: CCAMP (ccamp@ietf.org) <ccamp@ietf.org>;
> > > Subject: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > Working group,
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > Thanks to the fast IPR replies from the authors we're ready to
start a
> > two
> > > weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05.
> > >
> > > The last call ends on Wednesday November 21st . Please send you
> > comments to
> > > the CCAMP mailing list.
> > >
> > > Also comments along the lines of "I've reviewed the draft and
believe
> > it's
> > > ready for publication" are valuable.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > Authors, please threat pending comments as part of the last call
ones.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been
> > collected
> > > and can be found in the history of the document:
> > >
> >
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module/history/
> > >
> > > Please note that no IPR has been disclosed against the document.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >
> > > Daniele, Fatai, Oscar
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
>
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