Re: [CCAMP] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-07.txt

Hi,

This summarizes the changes made since WG LC:

- All abbreviations are spelled out before its first usage (general).
- Adding a paragraph that clarifies the relationship between this draft and GEN-Encode (in the introduction)
- Dropped the use of a new top-level TLV (Generic Node Attribute TLV). Instead the Node Attribute TLV (existing) was used. 
- In Section 5.2, added a text that deals with malformed TLV's: 
       "In case where the new sub-TLVs or their attendant encodings are  
       malformed, the proper action would be to log the problem and ignore  
       just the sub-TLVs in GMPLS path computations rather than ignoring  
       the entire LSA."  

- Security Section added: 
       "For general security aspects relevant to Generalized Multiprotocol  
       Label Switching (GMPLS)-controlled networks, please refer to  
       [RFC5920]."
- IANA Consideration Section, suggested type-values were specified for the new TLV's introduced. 
- Many editorials.

Attached is the diff marked between 05 and 07. 

Thanks,
Young

-----Original Message-----
From: Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net] 
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Subject: Re: FW: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-07.txt

Young,

Can you summarize the changes that have been made since WG LC?

Thank you,
Lou

On 2/5/2014 4:57 PM, Leeyoung wrote:
> 
> Hi Lou, 
> 
> This draft has passed WG's chair's go-ahead stage, ready for IESG evaluation. 
> 
> Regards,
> Young
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : OSPF-TE Extensions for General Network Element Constraints
>         Authors         : Fatai Zhang
>                           Young Lee
>                           Jianrui Han
>                           Greg Bernstein
>                           Yunbin Xu
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 13
> 	Date            : 2014-02-05
> 
> Abstract:
>    Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) can be used to
>    control a wide variety of technologies including packet switching
>    (e.g., MPLS), time-division (e.g., SONET/SDH, Optical Transport
>    Network (OTN)), wavelength (lambdas), and spatial switching (e.g.,
>    incoming port or fiber to outgoing port or fiber). In some of these
>    technologies, network elements and links may impose additional
>    routing constraints such as asymmetric switch connectivity, non-
>    local label assignment, and label range limitations on links. This
>    document describes Open Shortest Path First (OSPF) routing protocol
>    extensions to support these kinds of constraints under the control
>    of GMPLS.
> 
> 
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te/
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> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-07
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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Re: [CCAMP] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-07.txt

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