Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt

Hi Amy,

Thanks a lot for the update. No worries for the nit, you can fix it when addressing the comments coming from the next stages.

We will ask for the publication of the draft.

Thanks
Daniele  

> -----Original Message-----
> From: CCAMP [mailto:ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Yemin (Amy)
> Sent: lunedì 6 giugno 2016 08:52
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> Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-
> extension-05.txt
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> This version addresses the LC review comments from Acee Lindem and
> Daniele Ceccarelli.
> The main changes are:
> 1.	The title is changed to "OSPF-TE Link Availability Extension for Links
> with Variable Discrete Bandwidth"
> 2.	Rephrasing abstract, section 2 Overview, section 4 Security
> Considerations, and section 5 IANA Considerations. No technical changes,
> just text rephrasing.
> 3.	Editorial changes through the document
> 
> There's a Nit error which is not reported by the Nits check during the
> uploading stage, I found it only after completing the upload.
> I could fix it if required.
> 
> BR,
> Amy (on behalf of co-authors)
> 
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> Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-
> 05.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane of
> the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : OSPF-TE Link Availability Extension for Links with Variable
> Discrete Bandwidth
>         Authors         : Hao Long
>                           Min Ye
>                           Greg Mirsky
>                           Alessandro D'Alessandro
>                           Himanshu Shah
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt
> 	Pages           : 8
> 	Date            : 2016-06-05
> 
> Abstract:
>    A network may contain links with variable discrete bandwidth, e.g.,
>    copper, radio, etc. The bandwidth of such links may change
>    discretely in reaction to changing external environment.
>    Availability is typically used for describing such links during
>    network planning. This document introduces an optional ISCD
>    Availability sub-TLV to extend the Open Shortest Path First (OSPF)
>    Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) as defined in
>    [RFC4203]. This extension can be used for route computation in a
>    network that contains links with variable discrete bandwidth.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-
> extension/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-
> extension-05
> 
> 
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