[CCAMP] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-08

[Mehmet Ersue <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Mehmet Ersue
Review result: Has Nits

I reviewed the document "OSPF-TE Link Availability Extension for Links
with Variable Discrete Bandwidth"
(draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-08.txt) as part of the
Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
being processed by the IESG.  
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
operational area directors.  
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

Intended status: Standards Track                           
Current IESG state: AD is watching
IANA State: IANA OK - Actions Needed

Summary: 
The document introduces an optional Interface Switching Capability
Descriptor (ISCD) Availability sub-TLV to extend the GMPLS Open
Shortest Path First (OSPF) routing protocol for TE links with variable
discrete bandwidth. It has been recently extended to make it generic
to apply to multiple technologies. 

There are a few minor nits in the document:
The text in section 2 line 2 is misspelled: "include a< availability,
bandwidth> information list in its OSPF"
s/e(s).The/e(s). The/

The document has been written with a proper language. 
I think the document does not cause any issue related to operations
and management and can be published.

Mehmet