Re: I-D Action:draft-nadeau-ccamp-gmpls-oam-requirements-02.txt

Yes, I find this version clearer.

I was struck by two semantic changes, for which I am happy to leave any
discussion to when it is a WG I-D.  One is the change of the first sentence from
'This document describes requirements for data plane OAM for GMPLS'
to
'This document describes requirements for control plane OAM for GMPLS'
which sounds quite a change.   In practice, this does not reflect a dramatic
change of contents, but then again, I do not think either sentence gets it quite
right.

Second, I notice a much stronger emphasis on (SNMP) MIB modules; I presume it is
too early to accommodate other forms, such as the nascent NETCONF.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: <ccamp@ops.ietf.org>
Sent: Tuesday, October 09, 2007 11:37 AM
Subject: Fw: I-D Action:draft-nadeau-ccamp-gmpls-oam-requirements-02.txt

> Hi,
>
> FYI. We tried to take on board some of the comments and concerns raised on
> the list when we asked about adopting this as a WG I-D. We also worked to
> tidy up the language a bit.
>
> Would appreciate more thoughts especially from those who expressed concerns
> before.
>
> Thanks,
> Adrian
>
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> > Title           : OAM Requirements for Generalized Multi-Protocol Label
> > Switching (GMPLS) Networks
> > Author(s)       : T. Otani, et al.
> > Filename        : draft-nadeau-ccamp-gmpls-oam-requirements-02.txt
> > Pages           : 11
> > Date            : 2007-10-08
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> > This document describes requirements for operations and management
> > (OAM) for Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS)
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