Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-03 and call for shepherd

[LUIS MIGUEL CONTRERAS MURILLO <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

I've read the draft and believe it's ready to be published. There are just needed a number of not major editorial changes that I would recommend to address before publication:

.- generic usage of "&" along the document
.- in section 4.2, third paragraph: "... the L2 and L3 packet/Ethernet interfaces ..." would be probably better to write "... the L2 Ethernet and L3 IP packet interfaces ..."
.- proper description of the reference to ONF model as: [ONF-model] ONF TR-532, "Microwave Information Model", version 1.0, December 2016, available at https://www.opennetworking.org/images/stories/downloads/sdn-resources/technical-reports/TR-532-Microwave-Information-Model-V1.pdf
.- proper description of the reference to ONF Core Information Model as: [ONF-CIM] ONF TR-512, "Core Information Model", version 1.2, September 2016, available at https://www.opennetworking.org/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/TR-512_CIM_(CoreModel)_1.2.zip

Best Regards,
Luis (as a co-author)


De: CCAMP [mailto:[e-mail]] En nombre de Daniele Ceccarelli
Enviado el: martes, 21 de noviembre de 2017 9:22
Para: CCAMP ([e-mail]) <[e-mail]>
Asunto: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-03 and call for shepherd


WG,





This starts a two weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-03.

The last call ends on Tuesday  December 5th.

Please send your comments to the CCAMP mailing list. Also comments along the lines of "I've read the draft and believe it's ready to be published are appreciated".



All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been collected and can be found in the history of the document:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/history/

Please note that no IPR was disclosed against this draft.



If anyone is willing to be the shepherd of the document, please volunteer.



Thanks

Daniele & Fatai

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