Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05.txt

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From: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>
To: "Gabriele Maria Galimberti (ggalimbe)" <ggalimbe@cisco.com>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Thanks a lot Gabriele and authors,

Intermediate releases help the reviewers spread the work equally between the meetings instead of concentrating all of it in the 2 weeks before the upcoming one.

I'll do my review as preparation for last call.

BR
Daniele  

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From: CCAMP [mailto:ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gabriele Maria Galimberti (ggalimbe)
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05.txt

Hi All, 

We submitted the new draft version with most of comments from Julien addressed.

We still have to work on section 4.2 and refine section 4.1 and 5, Nevertheless, We posted the draft as is today to get further comments from the mailing list and Post a final document version ready for the last call.

Thanks a lot in advance for the feedbacks.

Best Regards,  

The Authors




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On 16/06/2017, 17:33, "CCAMP on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org" <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

    
    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane of the IETF.
    
            Title           : A framework for Management and Control of DWDM optical interface parameters
            Authors         : Ruediger Kunze
                              Gert Grammel
                              Dieter Beller
                              Gabriele Galimberti
    	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05.txt
    	Pages           : 28
    	Date            : 2017-06-16
    
    Abstract:
       To ensure an efficient data transport, meeting the requirements
       requested by today's IP-services the control and management of DWDM
       interfaces are a precondition for enhanced multilayer networking and
       for a further automation of network provisioning and operation.  This
       document describes use cases, requirements and solutions for the
       control and management of optical interfaces parameters according to
       different types of single channel DWDM interfaces.  The focus is on
       automating the network provisioning process irrespective on how it is
       triggered i.e. by EMS, NMS or GMPLS.  This document covers management
       as well as control plane considerations in different management cases
       of single channel DWDM interfaces.  The purpose is to identify the
       necessary information elements and processes to be used by control or
       management systems for further processing.
    
    
    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk/
    
    There are also htmlized versions available at:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05
    
    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-dwdm-if-mng-ctrl-fwk-05
    
    
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