Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06.txt

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06.txt
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Hi All, 

Please find an updated version "YANG data model for Flexi-Grid Optical
Networks", this version includes several updates: 

- Updated and reordered Abstract and Introduction 
- Updated Editor Notes
- Removed unnecessary motivation text
- Added blank lines between augmentations and fixed alignment of
continuation lines	
- Renamed <link> to <flexi-grid-link> for consistency with other documents 
- Fixed namespace text
- Categorised references, and identified some further normative references 
- Various NITS and TOC errors
	
There are YANG and BNF issues that still need to be addressed, including:

- Fix and remove unnecessary comments in YANG code
- Remove transponder related parameters from the model
- Fix BNF/RBNF code 	

BR, Dan. 

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane WG of
the IETF.

        Title           : YANG data model for Flexi-Grid Optical Networks
        Authors         : Jorge E. Lopez de Vergara
                          Daniel Perdices
                          Daniel King
                          Young Lee
                          Haomian Zheng
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06.txt
	Pages           : 73
	Date            : 2020-07-12

Abstract:
   This document defines a YANG module for managing flexi-grid optical
   networks. The model defined in this document specifies a flexi-grid
   traffic engineering database that is used to describe the topology of
   a flexi-grid network. It is based on and augments existing YANG
   models that describe network and traffic engineering topologies.

   A partner document defines a second YANG module for flexi-grid media
   channels, i.e., the paths from source to destination through a number
   of intermediate nodes.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang-06


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