Re: [CCAMP] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-08: (with COMMENT)

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Mon, 08 April 2019 18:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi,

Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-08: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Thank you addressing the Gen-ART review.
> 
> This sentence in Section 4 does not parse properly: The rest of the data model
> are made conditional with YANG the features "operator-actions",
> "alarm-shelving", "alarm-history", "alarm-summary", "alarm-profile", and
> "severity-assignment".

Now fixed; "...with the YANG features..."

> In 4.1: s/corresponds to the ITU Alarm Report Control functionality/corresponds
> to the ITU X.733 Alarm Report Control functionality

Now fixed.

Thanks for catching these!


/martin