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Re: [CCAMP] Shepherd writeup for "draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14" and "draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15"

Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com> Thu, 24 November 2022 13:43 UTC

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From: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>
To: "daniel@olddog.co.uk" <daniel@olddog.co.uk>, 'CCAMP' <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Shepherd writeup for "draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14" and "draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15"
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Hi Dan and Authors,

Thanks a lot for the update.
Regarding your question if it's not too complex to dig it out I would suggest to have a publicly available link in the reference. It might also not be the latest and greatest but one updated enough to cover the topic being referenced (maybe it's simpler to find).

Thanks
Daniele  

> -----Original Message-----
> From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of daniel@olddog.co.uk
> Sent: Thursday, 24 November 2022 11:04
> To: 'CCAMP' <ccamp@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Shepherd writeup for "draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14"
> and "draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15"
> 
> Dear Chairs, the authors of "draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14" and "draft-ietf-
> ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15",
> 
> Thanks for submitting the new version addressing the various issues.
> 
> Scanning the CCAMP list, I saw Tom did raise an important question about
> access to normative references:
> 
> draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-
> 16.html#name-
> normative-references
> 
> draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-15.html#name-n
> ormative-references
> 
> The ITU-T documents are relatively easy to access via URL, for example:
> 
> [G.709] https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-G.709
> 
> As Tom mentioned, the IEEE documents are more problematic:
> 
> [IEEE_754] https://standards.ieee.org/ieee/754/6210/
> 
> They are easily accessible with a subscription and may also be found without a
> subscription, but it requires some digging. I will update the Shepherd Write-up
> for draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang, highlighting the issue.
> 
> Finally, do the Chairs want to see a publically accessible URL provided for the
> normative references?
> 
> BR, Dan.
> 
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