Re: [CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)

"Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 09 October 2017 08:21 UTC

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From: "Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
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Date: Mon, 09 Oct 2017 10:15:16 +0200
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)
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Great. Thanks!

> Am 09.10.2017 um 04:21 schrieb Yemin (Amy) <amy.yemin@huawei.com>:
> 
> Hi Mirja,
>  
> Thanks for the comments.
> We will change according to the first comment.
> For the second comment, I think Greg’s text is good. What do you think?
>  
> BR,
> Amy
> From: Greg Mirsky [mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com] 
> Sent: Saturday, October 07, 2017 1:23 AM
> To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
> Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension@ietf.org; Fatai Zhang <zhangfatai@huawei.com>; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; ccamp@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)
>  
> Hi Mirja,
> would the following be acceptable to address your latter comment:
> OLD
> "Length: A 16 bits field that expresses the length of the TLV in
>    bytes. "
> NEW
> "Length: 2 octets, 16 bits."
>  
> Regards,
> Greg
>  
>  
> On Thu, Oct 5, 2017 at 10:49 AM, Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> wrote:
> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> This could lead to random outcomes
> "If multiple are present, only the first Availability
>    SCSI-TLV for an availability level carried in the same ISCD SHALL be
>    processed. "
> I would suggest the following instead:
> "If multiple are present, the Availability
>    SCSI-TLV with the lowest bandwidth value SHALL be
>    processed. "
> 
> Nit:
> In section 3.1 you may actually specify the actual length value as done for the type:
> OLD
> "Length: A 16 bits field that expresses the length of the TLV in
>    bytes. "
> NEW
> "Length: 4 (bytes), 16 bits."
>

[CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-i… Mirja Kühlewind
Re: [CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on dra… Greg Mirsky
Re: [CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on dra… Yemin (Amy)
Re: [CCAMP] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on dra… Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)