Re: [CDNi] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Wed, 06 July 2016 14:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [CDNi] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, Jul 6, 2016, at 03:01 PM, Benoit Claise wrote:

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> COMMENT:
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> My review flagged the same DISCUSS point 1 as Ben: the downref (The
> writeup mentions the two downrefs though).

Yes, I will need to re-Last Call the document.

> Secondly, the writeup,
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-metadata/shepherdwriteup/,
> is not really readable.

This is fixed now.

> And finally, Sheng Jiang's OPS DIR review flagged: 
> The example of footprint object has examples using IPv4. Because the
> other parts of this document does have IPv6 example, I think this is
> probably a mistake rather than not supporting IPv6 here on purpose (if it
> is on purpose, an explanation for reasons are necessary).

Editors should reply to this.