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Re: [CDNi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-21

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 25 February 2021 15:25 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [CDNi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-21
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Christer, thanks for your review. Unfortunately I ran out of time to review this document before the telechat so I did not ballot on this one.

Alissa


> On Feb 19, 2021, at 4:39 PM, Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-21
> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
> Review Date: 2021-02-19
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-19
> IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-25
> 
> Summary: The document is ready for publication. A very minor comment is that I
> do think that some of the paragraphs were quite long a detailed, and could
> perhaps have been split into separate paragraphs in order to make the text more
> clear.
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> Major issues: N/A
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> Minor issues: N/A
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> Nits/editorial comments: N/A
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