Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-02.txt

Hi Frederic,

  As part of the shepherd review, I was going over the references.  I think the terminology reference to RFC7337 (requirements) should be removed (we don't really reference anything from the requirements RFC).  I also think the reference to RFC7975 (redirection interface) should be replaced with RFC7336, since you're really talking about DNS redirection in general, not the CDNI recursive redirection interface.  RFC7337 and RFC7975 could then be removed from the informative references list.

thanx.

--  Kevin J. Ma

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> On May 24, 2023, at 11:38 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Content Delivery
> Networks Interconnection (CDNI) WG of the IETF.
> 
>   Title           : CDNI delegation using Automated Certificate Management Environment
>   Authors         : Frédéric Fieau
>                     Emile Stephan
>                     Sanjay Mishra
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-02.txt
>   Pages           : 11
>   Date            : 2023-05-24
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document defines metadata to support delegating the delivery of
>   HTTPS content between two or more interconnected CDNs.  Specifically,
>   this document defines a CDNI Metadata interface object to enable
>   delegation of X.509 certificates leveraging delegation schemes
>   defined in RFC9115.  RFC9115 allows delegating entities to remain in
>   full control of the delegation and be able to revoke it any time and
>   this avoids the need to share private cryptographic key material
>   between the involved entities.
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-02.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-02
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
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