Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-04.txt

Hi Christoph,

  Thanks for addressing the nits.  

  One more: the "should" in section 3.2 should be capitalized.

  Also, idnits notes: 'The document seems to use 'NOT RECOMMENDED' as an RFC 2119 keyword, but does not include the phrase in its RFC 2119 key words list.'  i think you can just add it to section 2.

thanx!

--  Kevin J. Ma

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> On Aug 17, 2023, at 4:01 AM, Christoph Neumann <Christoph.Neumann@broadpeak.tv> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> I submitted a new version of the internet draft covering delegated credentials.
> The new version removes all the nits pointed out by Kevin and Sanjay.
> 
> As discussed during IETF117 we should now ask for a secdir pre-review.
> What is the process for that?
> 
> Christoph
> 
> 
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> Subject: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-04.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) WG of the IETF.
> 
>   Title           : CDNI Metadata for Delegated Credentials
>   Authors         : Frederic Fieau
>                     Emile Stephan
>                     Guillaume Bichot
>                     Christoph Neumann
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-04.txt
>   Pages           : 11
>   Date            : 2023-08-17
> 
> Abstract:
>   The delivery of content over HTTPS involving multiple CDNs raises
>   credential management issues.  This document defines metadata in the
>   CDNI Control and Metadata interface to setup HTTPS delegation using
>   Delegated Credentials from an Upstream CDN (uCDN) to a Downstream CDN
>   (dCDN).
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-04
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-04
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> 
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