Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06.txt

[Kevin Ma <[e-mail]>]

Hi Christoph,

  I think the update draft looks good.  Some nits noted below.  Otherwise,
I think we're good to go.

--  Kevin J. Ma

- section 3.2: "via the MI, uCDN" -> "via the MI, the uCDN"
- section 3.2: "that requires an delegated credential that is up to date" -
"that requires an up-to-date delegated credential"

- section 4: "an uCDN" -> "a uCDN"
- section 4: "JOSE/JWE" -> "JWE" ?

- section 5: "the Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface" -> "the
CDNI FCI"
- section 5: "the CDNI Metadata interface" - "the MI" ?
- section 5: "the CDNI MI" - "the MI" ?

- section 6: "IANA the registration" -> "IANA registration"

- section 7: "period is set to 7 days" -> "period set to 7 days"
- section 7: "JOSE / JWE" -> "JWE" ?
- section 7: "Note that," -> "Note that"
- section 7: "the imact" -> "the impact"


On Mon, Feb 19, 2024 at 5:49 AM Christoph Neumann <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I submitted a new version of the delegated credentials CDNI draft.
> I took into account all the nits, editorial comments.
> I also updated the description of the delegated credential structure in
> the MI object, such that the structure contains a certificate chain that
> embeds the delegated credential.
>
> Is this document ready for working group last call?
>
> Christoph
>
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> Subject: [CDNi] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06.txt
>
> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06.txt is now
> available. It is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks
> Interconnection
> (CDNI) WG of the IETF.
>
>    Title:   CDNI Metadata for Delegated Credentials
>    Authors: Frederic Fieau
>             Emile Stephan
>             Guillaume Bichot
>             Christoph Neumann
>    Name:    draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06.txt
>    Pages:   12
>    Dates:   2024-02-19
>
> Abstract:
>
>    The delivery of content over HTTPS involving multiple CDNs raises
>    credential management issues.  This document defines metadata in the
>    CDNI Control and Metadata interface to setup HTTPS delegation using
>    delegated credentials from an Upstream CDN (uCDN) to a Downstream CDN
>    (dCDN).
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts/
>
> There is also an HTMLized version available at:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-https-delegation-subcerts-06
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>
>
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