[Cellar] WGLC draft-ietf-cellar-matroska --- pace of first few chapters
Martijn van Beurden <mvanb1@gmail.com> Thu, 07 April 2022 19:34 UTC
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Subject: [Cellar] WGLC draft-ietf-cellar-matroska --- pace of first few chapters
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I don't know whether this is important in specification documents, but I find the first few chapters having a strange pace, for lack of a better term. Introduction -> Status of this document -> Security considerations -> Notations and conventions -> Basis in EBML -> Language codes -> Matroska structure. This seems unnecessary switching topics. I propose moving security considerations to the back of the document (just before IANA considerations) and Language codes to before Unknown elements. Also, Basis in EBML seems a bit of a strange title to me. Perhaps merging Basis in EBML and Matroska structure to one chapter with the title Matroska structure would be better? One could say the Matroska format is 'structured' using EBML. The content now under Matroska structure would then be a section with the name 'Matroska overview', or a more specific name like 'Element overview'? This way the document starts with the basis, the root of Matroska, instead of details like language codes.
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