[Cellar] A few minor comments on draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-13

["Alexey Melnikov" <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Thank you for addressing most of my AD review comments. I followed up on a few remaining issues in a separate thread.

I just reviewed changed since version -10 and have a few new minor comments:

I think [W3C.REC-xmlschema-0-20041028] should be a Normative Reference, because of how it is referenced in Section 11.1.15. (I assume the XML Schema there is normative.)

It would be good to have an example of <implementation_note> in the document.

In Section 11.1.5.8 the following test was added:

   An unwritten mandatory
   Element with a declared default value is semantically to that Element

I think the word "equivalent" is missing after "semantically".

   if written with the default value stored as the Element Data.

I would ask editors to address these in the next revision. However the above are not serious enough to delay IETF LC, so I will start it now.

Best Regards,
Alexey