[clue] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-16: (with DISCUSS)

["Alexey Melnikov" <[e-mail]>]

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DISCUSS:
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Thank you for updating the document. However one of the changes looks
incorrect to me:

You incorrectly using RFC 2119 as a reference for language tags instead
of RFC 5646. The following changes will address my concern:

In 11.3 replace:

OLD:
  Such an attribute is compliant with [RFC2119].

NEW:
  Such an attribute is compliant with the Language-Tag ABNF production
from [RFC5646].

In 11.5 replace:

OLD:
  Each such element has to be compliant with [RFC2119].

NEW:
  Each such element has to be compliant with the Language-Tag ABNF
production from [RFC5646].