[core] Review of draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-10
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Subject: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-10
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Hello Roman, Thanks a lot for your review! Please find at the end of this mail our reply to your comment archived at [COMMENT]. A Github PR where we have addressed your comment is available at [PR]. Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the other ones related to other received reviews), and to submit the result as version -11 of the document. Thanks, /Marco [COMMENT] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc/ballot/#draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc_roman-danyliw [PR] https://github.com/core-wg/oscore-edhoc/pull/24 ========= ** References. [RFC8392], [RFC5280] and [I-D.ietf-cose-cbor-encoded-cert] are being used to references to create registry in Section 8.3. They should be normative references. ==>MT We have made the following changes: * We have made RFC 8392 and RFC 5280 normative references. * The codepoint 3 for C509 certificates is not an initial entry for the new IANA registry anymore. This registration can instead be requested in the "IANA Considerations" section of draft-ietf-cose-cbor-encoded-cert. * We have removed the reference to draft-ietf-cose-cbor-encoded-cert. <== -- Marco Tiloca Ph.D., Senior Researcher Phone: +46 (0)70 60 46 501 RISE Research Institutes of Sweden AB Box 1263 164 29 Kista (Sweden) Division: Digital Systems Department: Computer Science Unit: Cybersecurity https://www.ri.se
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