[core] draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis-15 telechat Tsvart review

Magnus Westerlund via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 07 October 2025 09:23 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-bis
Title: Group Communication for the Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)
Reviewer: Magnus Westerlund
Review result: Ready

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This is a follow up on my review of -14. 

I like to thank the authors for addressing the issues I spotted and explain details I had missed. 

I leave the handling of the reference to proxy to the ADs to discuss what their view are. The text
has been clarified that this is intended for future extension based on a specification.

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