Re: [core] Tr : New Version Notification for draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01.txt

["Dijk, Esko" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Matthieu,

I wondered about the phrasing:
"it is a list of web links to resources that have been modified by
       clients since either the last PUT request or the last call to the
       modification check interface.  "

That sounds ambiguous, as if the Mirror Server (MS) implementation could *choose* one out of two point in time as the last-modified-time.

Maybe something like this is more accurate?
"it is a list that contains web links to all resources that have been modified by
       clients since either 1) the last PUT request from the SEP was received by the Mirror Server, or 2) the last call to the
       modification check interface made by the SEP was received by the Mirror Server, whichever one was most recent. "

Esko

PS glad to see that my earlier comments have been promoted from 'fruitful' to 'useful' ;)

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Subject: [core] Tr : New Version Notification for draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01.txt


Dear working group,

I have posted a minor change to mirror server draft thanks to Esko and Carsten.

Best regards,
Matthieu

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A new version of I-D, draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01.txt
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IETF repository.

Filename:  draft-vial-core-mirror-server
Revision:  01
Title:  CoRE Mirror Server
Creation date:  2013-04-10
Group:  Individual Submission
Number of pages: 20
URL:             http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01.txt
Status:          http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vial-core-mirror-server
Htmlized:        http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01
Diff:            http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-vial-core-mirror-server-01

Abstract:
  The Constrained RESTful Environments (CoRE) working group aims at
  realizing the REpresentational State Transfer (REST) architecture in
  a suitable form for the most constrained nodes.  Thanks to the
  Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP), REST is now applicable to
  constrained networks.  However the most energy-constrained devices
  may enter sleep mode and disconnect their network link during several
  minutes to save energy, hence preventing them from acting as
  traditional web servers.  This document describes how a sleeping
  device can store resource representations in an entity called Mirror
  Server and participate in a constrained RESTful environment.




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