Re: [core] Gunter Van de Velde's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-10: (with COMMENT)

[Marco Tiloca <[e-mail]>]

Hello Gunter,

Thanks a lot for your review! Please find in line below our detailed 
replies to your comments.

A Github PR where we have addressed your comments is available at [PR].

Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the 
other ones related to other received reviews), and to submit the result 
as version -11 of the document.

Thanks,
/Marco

[PR] https://github.com/core-wg/oscore-edhoc/pull/23

On 2024-03-29 09:47, Gunter Van de Velde via Datatracker wrote:
> Gunter Van de Velde has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-10: No Objection
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> idnits spits up a downref (ref. 'I-D.ietf-core-target-attr').
> Not sure if in the reference section an IANA registry reference is better
> informational then normative reference.

==>MT

Version -10 of the Internet Draft was published before the "Target 
Attributes" registry was created. As expected by IANA, we included in 
Section 8.2 a reference to the document defining the registry, i.e., 
draft-ietf-core-target-attr.

Now that the registry exists, we have included a normative reference to 
the registry itself, and made the reference to 
draft-ietf-core-target-attr an informative reference.

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