[core] AD review of draft-ietf-core-etch-02.txt
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Wed, 24 August 2016 10:16 UTC
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Subject: [core] AD review of draft-ietf-core-etch-02.txt
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I think the document reads well and I only have a few minor comments. Please address them (or at least discuss them) before the end of IETF Last Call, which I am going to start now: I think response code 4.15 should be mentioned in Section 2 and not just in the IANA Considerations section. I am generally missing Error handling section for the FETCH method, similarly to what you have for PATCH/iPATCH. draft-hartke-core-apps-03 is mentioned several times in the document. It is currently expired. What is the plan with getting it finished? Nit: It looks like RFC 6902 and RFC 7396 should be Normative (IANA Registrations). Obsolete reference: RFC 2616. You also need to update section references you use when referencing RFC 2616 to point to the correct section and RFC from the latest HTTP/1.1 set of RFCs. Best Regards, Alexey
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