[core] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [core] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-senml-versions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Section 7.1, paragraph 4, comment: > [IANA.senml] > IANA, "Sensor Measurement Lists (SenML)", > <http://www.iana.org/assignments/senml>. Not sure if a normative reference to an IANA registry page is technically OK; it should probably cite the RFC that created that registry instead, and maybe add an informative reference to the registry page? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. Section 2.1, paragraph 4, nit: - decimal numbers, e.g. 26 (0b11010, 0x1a) for a version that adds the + decimal numbers, e.g., 26 (0b11010, 0x1a) for a version that adds the + + The text version of this document contains these HTML entities, which might indicate issues with its XML source: Section 1, paragraph 2, nit: > es additional features over time. However in the case of SenML it is expecte > ^^^^^^^ Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb? Section 3, paragraph 2, nit: > secondary unit names [RFC8798] MAY be be used in the "u" field of SenML Reco > ^^^^^ Possible typo: you repeated a word These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://www.iana.org/assignments/senml
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