Re: [core] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8428 (6728)

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Mon, 01 November 2021 15:09 UTC

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From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
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Date: Mon, 01 Nov 2021 16:09:15 +0100
Cc: veijo.pesonen@nordicsemi.no, fluffy@iii.ca, Zach Shelby <zach.shelby@arm.com>, jari.arkko@piuha.net, Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com>, core@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [core] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8428 (6728)
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This is a valid stylistic nit, but of no consequence to implementation or interoperability.
Please mark as “editorial”.

Grüße, Carsten


> On 2021-11-01, at 15:40, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8428,
> "Sensor Measurement Lists (SenML)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6728
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Veijo Pesonen <veijo.pesonen@nordicsemi.no>
> 
> Section: 11
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> SenML-Pack = [1* record]
> 
>   record = {
>     ? bn => tstr,        ; Base Name
>     ? bt => numeric,     ; Base Time
>     ? bu => tstr,        ; Base Units
>     ? bv => numeric,     ; Base Value
>     ? bs => numeric,     ; Base Sum
>     ? bver => uint,      ; Base Version
>     ? n => tstr,        ; Name
>     ? u => tstr,        ; Units
>     ? s => numeric,     ; Sum
>     ? t => numeric,     ; Time
>     ? ut => numeric,    ; Update Time
>     ? ( v => numeric // ; Numeric Value
>         vs => tstr //   ; String Value
>         vb => bool //   ; Boolean Value
>         vd => binary-value ) ; Data Value
>     * key-value-pair
>   }
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> SenML-Pack = [1* record]
> 
>   record = {
>     ? bn => tstr,        ; Base Name
>     ? bt => numeric,     ; Base Time
>     ? bu => tstr,        ; Base Units
>     ? bv => numeric,     ; Base Value
>     ? bs => numeric,     ; Base Sum
>     ? bver => uint,      ; Base Version
>     ? n => tstr,        ; Name
>     ? u => tstr,        ; Units
>     ? s => numeric,     ; Sum
>     ? t => numeric,     ; Time
>     ? ut => numeric,    ; Update Time
>     ? ( v => numeric // ; Numeric Value
>         vs => tstr //   ; String Value
>         vb => bool //   ; Boolean Value
>         vd => binary-value ), ; Data Value
>     * key-value-pair
>   }
> 
> Notes
> -----
> It would show good style to set the comma even though it's not required.
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8428 (draft-ietf-core-senml-16)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Sensor Measurement Lists (SenML)
> Publication Date    : August 2018
> Author(s)           : C. Jennings, Z. Shelby, J. Arkko, A. Keranen, C. Bormann
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Constrained RESTful Environments
> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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