Re: [core] I-D Action: draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02.txt

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Wed, 30 August 2023 16:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [core] I-D Action: draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02.txt
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As discussed today in the interim, I pasted in Marco’s process proposal (with further edits, all errors are mine).  This is now Section 1.1.2.
Please consider whether you believe that we could adopt this as a WG document.

Grüße, Carsten


> On 2023-08-30, at 18:12, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> Internet-Draft draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02.txt is now available.
> 
>   Title:   Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP): Corrections and Clarifications
>   Author:  Carsten Bormann
>   Name:    draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02.txt
>   Pages:   8
>   Dates:   2023-08-30
> 
> Abstract:
> 
>   RFC 7252 defines the Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP), along
>   with a number of additional specifications, including RFC 7641, RFC
>   7959, RFC 8132, and RFC 8323.  RFC 6690 defines the link format that
>   is used in CoAP self-description documents.
> 
>   Some parts of the specification may be unclear or even contain errors
>   that may lead to misinterpretations that may impair interoperability
>   between different implementations.  The present document provides
>   corrections, additions, and clarifications to the RFCs cited; this
>   document thus updates these RFCs.  In addition, other clarifications
>   related to the use of CoAP in other specifications, including RFC
>   7390 and RFC 8075, are also provided.
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-bormann-core-corr-clar/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-bormann-core-corr-clar-02