[core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02
Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Sun, 12 January 2020 05:03 UTC
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Subject: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02
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Klaus, The change of text by adding the last paragraph of section 3.1.1 took me by surprise. It does not match what my understanding of how things are going to be parsed. It took me quite a while to realize that there is a set of conflicting statements here. To me, the text appears to state that when parsing document there is a single environment, and that environment consists of two variables. However, when parsing a link or a form there is a new pair of variables that are added to this environment. Thus in my mind the environment consists of a stack of variable pairs not just a single pair of variables. Section 3.2.1 - There is a MUST NOT in the last paragraph, is the receiver of a document supposed to enforce this in some manner if it is in a location that it does not currently care about. Some things can be checked such as an integer where a text string is required, but for form fields this would seem to be not generally enforceable. Section 4.2.3.3 - I think I might be missing some restrictions here and want to verify. Consider the following document: #using a = <http://coapapp.org/app1> a:2#tag </tos> In this case, is the result of the processing <http://coapapp.org/app12#tag>? Jim
- [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02 Jim Schaad
- Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02 Klaus Hartke
- Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02 Jim Schaad
- Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-coral -02 Klaus Hartke