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Re: [COSE] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-cose-x509-07: (with COMMENT)

Ivaylo Petrov <ivaylo@ackl.io> Sun, 01 November 2020 16:23 UTC

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From: Ivaylo Petrov <ivaylo@ackl.io>
Date: Sun, 01 Nov 2020 17:22:38 +0100
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To: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
Cc: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, Laurence Lundblade <lgl@island-resort.com>, draft-ietf-cose-x509@ietf.org, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>, Cose Chairs Wg <cose-chairs@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, cose <cose@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [COSE] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-cose-x509-07: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks, Carsten, for the suggestion! It sounds much better to me that way.
I will look at the comments from other people now and hopefully submit a
new version later today.


On Sat, Oct 31, 2020 at 11:03 PM Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:

>
>
> > On 2020-10-31, at 21:56, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > I would be happy if it the paragraph in question was rewritten to be
> clearer, perhaps using the words in the exchange between me and Michael.
> Really, simply replacing the passive voice in the sentence with active
> pretty much forces you to be clear about who is doing what.
>
> Like:
>
> Certificates obtained from any of these methods MUST still be validated.
> ➔
> Parties that intend to rely on the assertions made by a certificate
> obtained from any of these methods still need to validate it.
>
> ?
>
> (Note that I changed the RFC 2119 MUST into a statement of fact, which is
> orthogonal to the question of who the actor of the validation is.)
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
>

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