Re: [Crisp] Last Call Comments: iris-xpc

Andrew Newton <andy@hxr.us> Wed, 26 October 2005 15:30 UTC

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From: Andrew Newton <andy@hxr.us>
Subject: Re: [Crisp] Last Call Comments: iris-xpc
Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2005 11:30:39 -0400
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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On Oct 14, 2005, at 9:29 AM, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:

> Section 12: what are the URI schemes needed for?  I don't see them
> described anywhere in the document.  Are they related to the  
> "iris.xpc1"
> <transferProtocol> element described in Section 6.2?  If so, something
> appears incorrect -- the examples use "iris.lwz":
>
> <transferProtocol protocolId="iris.lwz">

Same answer as before, except this example is even more wrong.  It  
should be "iris.xpc1"... considering this is the xpc draft.

> Section 12.5: It might be helpful to add a "TBD" field to hold the
> actual port number assigned by IANA so the number shows up in the RFC
> document.  The RFC Editor can fill that in once IANA has completed the
> requested actions.

Still a good idea.

-andy

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