[Dance] Re: Start of Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-dance-architecture-06

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 08 June 2024 20:28 UTC

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Date: Sat, 08 Jun 2024 16:27:49 -0400
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Olle,

Have you checked your nits?

  == Missing Reference: 'XXXrefereceXXX' is mentioned on line 785, but not
     defined

  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.johansson-sipcore-dane-sip' is defined on line
     875, but no explicit reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC9140' is defined on line 932, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

tim


On Wed, May 29, 2024 at 2:48 AM Olle E. Johansson <oej@edvina.net> wrote:

> We need to resolve issue #28 before publishing. The text in the
> terminology section is not publication-ready ;-)
>
>
> [image: 28.png]
>
> Terminology · Issue #28 · ietf-wg-dance/draft-dance-architecture
> <https://github.com/ietf-wg-dance/draft-dance-architecture/issues/28>
> github.com
> <https://github.com/ietf-wg-dance/draft-dance-architecture/issues/28>
> <https://github.com/ietf-wg-dance/draft-dance-architecture/issues/28>
>
> Thank you all for good work in getting the document to this state!
>
> /O
>
>
> On 29 May 2024, at 02:01, Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net> wrote:
>
>
> Folks,
>
> The DANCE architecture document is ready for working group last call, and
> we thank all the various different contributors over the years for helping
> it finally get to this state.  Please review and comment on this document
> about its readiness for publication by June 25th, anywhere on earth.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dance-architecture/06/
>
> Thank you and continue dancing!
> --
> Wes Hardaker
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