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Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Mon, 25 March 2024 06:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dance] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dance-architecture-04.txt
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internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-dance-architecture-04.txt is now available. It is a
    > work item of the DANE Authentication for Network Clients Everywhere (DANCE) WG
    > of the IETF.

    > Title:   An Architecture for DNS-Bound Client and Sender Identities
    > Authors: Ash Wilson
    > Shumon Huque
    > Olle Johansson
    > Michael Richardson
    > Name:    draft-ietf-dance-architecture-04.txt
    > Pages:   21
    > Dates:   2024-03-24

I have merged two outstanding PRs.
One I did manually ("git cherry-pick"), because there were conflicts, but
also I was confused about the part where Rick saw a duplicate term and
removed it, and I didn't understand.

Allison Mankin/Bill Woodcock have promised text, but I'm still looking for
it.

Viktor had promised SMTP text.

    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dance-architecture-04

Please read the diffs careful.
I might have resolved a conflict backwards.  I'm stupid that way.

Note: please watch trailing whitespace (I have emacs plugin if you need it).
Please also consider one sentence per line, letting your editor wrap it for
you.   IF you want to wrap it yourself, fine, but start new sentences on
newlines, as this is much more git-friendly.

WG chairs: I'm sure we can wrap it all up before 120.  Thank you for keeping
	   us honest.

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